Mmm, I did wince at parts... I've been lucky enough (or more likely, have not been writing long enough) not to get a scathing review, but I have had stuff rejected with reasons given. And whilst one of these was a kick-yourself moment, as tbh it was something I'd worried over myself (so why the bloody hell didn't I fix it instead of hoping they wouldn't notice), others have been a definite learning experience as they were things I hadn't even thought of. Like the second-person thing - I had no idea until recently how much people hate that! ;)

And thank you, btw! :D