Remind me (am going senile) - is this your first published story? Because it really is better stylistically than so much stuff out there. (and are you, hint, on my mailing list, hint, where I pass on details of any calls for submissions, hint, I come across?)
And I should have said, any paragraph with 'Bob the bouncer' and a reference to slappers (a fave word chez nous) gets 10/10 from me.
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Date: 2009-07-14 11:46 am (UTC)Remind me (am going senile) - is this your first published story? Because it really is better stylistically than so much stuff out there. (and are you, hint, on my mailing list, hint, where I pass on details of any calls for submissions, hint, I come across?)
And I should have said, any paragraph with 'Bob the bouncer' and a reference to slappers (a fave word chez nous) gets 10/10 from me.