Lovely review for Stroke–and a beta request

I’m a little late posting about this one – Google Alerts, you have failed me! – but I’ve had a lovely review for Stroke to His Cox over at Whipped Cream Reviews:

The writing is incredibly good with tons of sly references and wry humor. The English setting is vivid and captures the adrenaline and competitiveness of the sport– 4.5 cherries.

You can read the full review here, should you be so minded. 

- but before you click the linky, if you haven’t read Stroke to His Cox, and are willing to give me a bit of help, please stay on this page!

I’ve actually written a little sequelletto to the story, and I’d be very grateful to anyone who hasn’t read the original and who could spare a little time to look over 900 words and tell me if it stands okay on its own.